The refutation and concession

4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.

I will concede that people can avoid this phenomenon if they are not aware of others' eyes and there are some bad effects of this phenomenon. I will suggest some results of experiments to show that group living makes some serious pressure.

1. What is my thesis?
'The phenomenon that people follow some trends is reasonable'.

2. What is the opposite position?
'The phenomenon that people follow some trends is not reasonable'.

3. What arguments can I anticipate?
  1)There are some side effcts of this phenomenon
  2) This phenomenon is applied to certain group so that this is limitative.
 
4. How will I counter those arguments?
1) What you said is fact, however you can see the effects positively like seeking the value of group.
2) It is true ,but it is not important. The more important thing is the existence of these kinds of people who are influenced by this phenomenon.

My Refutation and Concession
   When people read this argument, they can think that if they are not aware of others' eyes they can avoid this kind of phenomenon. This suggestion is very easy as it seems because the suggesters consider themselves as someone who is not applied to the phenomenon. However, if they faced or realized that they are also aplied to this phenomenon ,they would also have difficulty to avoid it. Others also can say that there are some side effects like consuming by force like the rich not to fall behind others. This is true. However, the side effect can become a strong point. According to the 'Navercast', the author said that we can consider this effect as seeking the selective value of group. The opponents also insist that This phenomenon is applied to certain group so that this is limitative. It is true ,but it is not important. The more important thing is the existence of these kinds of people who are influenced by this phenomenon.