2014년 11월 4일 화요일

The conclusion

5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument, and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.
I will close with a summary of my previous points, emphasize that the trend consumption effect is reasonable and negative effects of it. I will end with a reaffirmation of my original thesis.

It is true that this phenomenon has various negative effects, however this phenomenon also gives us a adequate social phenomenon. As I mention before this (above this paragraph ). Thus the psychology of trend consumption is not always bad. Through the reasons that I suggested, The phenomenon that people follow some trends is reasonable. I will mention the reasons of my argument again.People have lived a group living so that they have wanted to belong their society. In the process of belonging their society, they want to feel sense of kinship. To feel this sense they began to be aware of others and imitate common things of others. This situation was developed to the psychology of trend consumption. There are some another reason that people undergo the phenomenon. People get pressure which we cannot see. So, they get pressure that they have to follow others. This is inevitable. Through this I think that 'The phenomenon that people follow some trends is reasonable.'

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